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Re: Changes to the training programme

Dear Mr Zhang,

I'm writing to inform you of some changes to our training programme plan.

Firstly, we had previously agreed that you would submit the proposal for the training programme this Thursday. However, due to time constraints, I wonder if it would be possible to have them by Tuesday.

Secondly, there's been some discussion here on whether or not we should include 'teleconferencing' and 'videoconferencing' in the training. Do you think there is enough time for these in addition to the other areas? I would be grateful for your advice.

Please let me know if these two changes are possible, and if not, your alternative suggestions. We thank you again for your hard work.

Mary Wang
HR Manager

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