hero and
heroine in her oven, having "fatted" them up well, to make
sweet her eating of them, was by the
coolness and cleverness of the
heroine locked in her own oven and baked there,
literally brought
down the house. She received exactly what she had planned to give
those children, whom their own cruel parents had unwittingly, by
losing the children in the wood, put into her hands. Quaint,
naive, half-grotesque it was in
conception, yet the truth of all
drama was there
actively exhibited, and all casuistic pleading of
excuses of some sort, even of
justification for the witch (that it
was her nature;
heredity in her aworking, etc., etc.) would have
not only been out of place, but hotly
resented by that audience.
Now, Stevenson, if he could have made up his mind to have the witch
locked in her own oven, would most
assuredly have tried some device
to get her out by some fairy witch-device or magic slide at the far
end of it, and have proceeded to paint for us the changed
characterthat she was after she had been so outwitted by a child, and her
witchdom proved after all of little effect. He would have put
probably some of the most
effective moralities into her mouth if
indeed he would not after all have made the witch a
triumph on his
early principle of bad-heartedness being strength. If this is the
sort of falsification which the play demands, and is of all tastes
the most ungrateful, then, it is clear, that for full effect of the
drama it is
essential to it; but what is
primary in it is the
direct answering to certain immediate and
instinctive demands in
common human nature, the doing of which is far more
effective than
no end of deep
philosophy to show how much better human nature
would be if it were not just quite thus constituted.
"Concentration," says Mr Pinero, "is first, second, and last in
it," and he goes on thus, as reported in the SCOTSMAN, to show
Stevenson's
defect and mistake and, as is not, of course,
unnatural, to
magnify the
greatness and
grandeur of the style of
work in which he has himself been so successful.
"If Stevenson had ever mastered that art - and I do not question
that if he had
properly conceived it he had it in him to master it
- he might have found the stage a gold mine, but he would have
found, too, that it is a gold mine which cannot be worked in a
smiling, sportive, half-contemptuous spirit, but only in the sweat
of the brain, and with every
mental nerve and sinew strained to its
uttermost. He would have known that no ingots are to be got out of
this mine, save after
sleepless nights, days of gloom and
discouragement, and other days, again, of
feverish toil, the result
of which proves in the end to be misapplied and has to be thrown to
the winds. . . . When you take up a play-book (if ever you do take
one up) it strikes you as being a very
trifling thing - a mere
insubstantial
pamphlet beside the
imposing bulk of the latest six-
shilling novel. Little do you guess that every page of the play
has cost more care, severer
mentaltension, if not more actual
manual labour, than any chapter of a novel, though it be fifty
pages long. It is the
height of the author's art, according to the
old maxim, that the ordinary
spectator should never be clearly
conscious of the skill and travail that have gone to the making of
the finished product. But the artist who would
achieve a like feat
must realise its difficulties, or what are his chances of success?"
But what I should, in little, be inclined to say, in answer to the
"
concentration" idea is that, unless you have first some firm hold
on the broad bed-rock facts of human nature
speciallyappealed to
or called forth by the drama, you may
concentrate as much as you
please, but you will not write a successful
acting drama, not to
speak of a great one. Mr Pinero's magnifications of the immense
effort demanded from him must in the end come to mean that he
himself does not
instinctively and with natural ease and
spontaneity secure this, but secures it only after great
consciouseffort; and hence, perhaps, it is that he as well as so many other
modern playwrights fall so far behind alike in the
amount turned
out, and also in its quality as compared with the products of many
playwrights in the past.
The problem drama, in every phase and turn of it,
endeavours to
dispense with these funda
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instinctive sense or
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consciousness of the mass of men and women,
and to
substitute for that interest something which will
artificially supersede it, or, at any rate, take its place. The
interest is transferred from the crises
necessarily worked up to in
the one case, with all of situation and dialogue directed to it,
and without which it would not be
strictly explicable, to something
ab
normal, odd,
artificial or inverted, or
exceptional in the
characters themselves. Having thus, instead of natural process and
sequence, if we may put it so, the problem
dramatist has a double
task - he must gain what unity he can, and reach such crises as he
may by
artificial aids and
inventions which the more he uses the
more makes natural
simplicity unattainable; and next he must reduce
and hide as far as he can the ab
normality he has, after all, in the
long run, created and p
resented. He cannot
maintain it to the
full, else his work would become a mere
medical or psychological
treatise under the poorest of disguises; and the very necessity for
the action and
reaction of
characters upon each other is a further
element against him. In a word no one
character can stand alone,
and cannot escape influencing others, and also the action. Thus it
is that he cannot
isolate as a doctor does his patient for
scientific
examination. The
healthy and
normal must come in to
modify on all sides what is p
resented of un
healthy and ab
normal,
and by its very presence
expose the other, while at the same time
it, by its very presence, ministers
improvement, exactly as the
sunlight disperses mist and all un
healthy vapours, germs, and
microbes.
The problem
dramatist, in place of broad effect and truth to
nature, must find it in
stress of
invention and
resource of that
kind. Thus care and
concentration must be all in all with him - he
must never let himself go, or get so interested and taken with his
characters that THEY, in a sense, control or direct him. He is all
too
conscious a "maker" and must pay for his
originality by what in
the end is really
painful and overweighted work. This, I take it,
is the reason why so many of the modern
dramatists find their work
so hard, and are,
comparatively, so slow in the production of it,
while they would fain, by many devices, secure the general
impression or
appeal made to all classes alike by the natural or
what we may call
spontaneous drama, they are yet, by the necessity
of subject matter and methods of
dealing with it,
limited to the
real interest of a special class - to whom is finally given up what
was meant for mankind - and the troublesome and
trying task laid on
them, to try as best they may to
reconcile two really conflicting
tendencies which cannot even by art be
reconciled but really point
different ways and tend to different ends. As the impressionist
and the pre-Raphaelite, in the sister-art of
painting cannot be
combined and
reconciled in one
painter - so it is here; by
conception and methods they go different ways, and if they SEEK the
same end, it is by opposing processes - the original
conceptionalike of nature and of art dictating the process.
As for Stevenson, it was no lack of care or
concentration in
anything that he touched; these two were never
lacking, but because
his
subtlety, mystical bias and dreaminess, and theorising on human
nature made this to him impossible. He might have
concentrated as
much as he pleased,
concentrated as much as even Mr Pinero desires,
but he would not have made a successful drama, because he was
Robert Louis Stevenson, and not Mr Pinero, and too long, as he
himself confessed, had a
tendency to think bad-heartedness was
strength; while the only true and
enduring joy attainable in this
world - whether by deduction from life itself, or from IMPRESSIONS
of art or of the drama, is simply the steady, unassailable, and
triumphant
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consciousness that it is not so, but the
reverse, that
goodness and self-sacrifice and self-surrender are the only
strength in the
universe. Just as Byron had it with patriotism:-
"Freedom's battle once begun,
Bequeathed from bleeding sire to son,
Tho' baffled oft is ever won."
To go
consciously either in
fiction or in the drama for bad-
heartedness as strength, is to court
failure - the broad,
healthy,
human heart, thank Heaven, is so made as to
resent the doctrine;
and if a
fiction or a play based on this idea for the moment