看着我给博文英语乐的孩子们留故事作业,还认真给他们评判,儿子按捺不住了。他一直在写英语日记,不过都是关于日常的事情。我没有让他画画编故事,也没有给他买"山寨版"的英语故事本,于是他就用普通的单线本画画写故事,已经写了好几个。昨天有一点时间,我就把其中一个故事打出来了,完全忠实原文,没有做任何修改,包括标点符号。
Floppy and the Ruin of the
Oldest Palace
Floppy was pleased that Biff and Chip were at school. He could
have a rest. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow.
"Oh, no!" said Floppy,
"dogs hates adventures."
Magic key took Floppy to a forest. Floppy saw a man.
"Hello, I'm John,
I'm looking for a ruin called
'the finest palace'.
It's the oldest palace." said
the man, "Who are you?"
"I'm
Floppy," said Floppy. "What are
you doing, John?"
"I'm an
explorer." said John,
"can't you remember what
I've said?"
"Oh, sorry, John!" said Floppy.
"Can you help me?" John asked.
"OK!" said Floppy, he likes
John.
They went to a hot desert. Floppy is hot. "I
want to have a rest!" said Floppy, crossly.
"OK!" said John.
Then, they saw a river, there is a boat too.
"We'll go across this river,
OK?" said John. "No! Shall we
use the boat to get down the river." said
Floppy.
They saw a waterfall, it's very high! The boat
crashed, John and Floppy got wet. "Oh no, we are
wet!" said Floppy.
Then, they saw a cave. Inside the cave, there were lots of
steps. Floppy and John went up steps. They were so tired, so they
had a rest.
Wow! They saw the palace which John was looking for!
John was pleased. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow.
"Bye!" said Floppy.
The magic key took Floppy back. "I like this
adventure." said Floppy.