儿子开学了,不知道他还是否有时间续写他的这个故事,目前已完成七个章节,共4700多字,按他的话说,刚写了开头,难道他要写一个长篇小说不成?
Chapter 5
They were on the way to the Stone Cove. The
atomies told them that the Stone armies lived there.
"The atomies live in the Cove of Mouse for
9800 years. They can live about 500 years. They believe God Alu,
the King of all the lives," an atomy was telling
Elisabeth about atomies, "They are good at making
weapons. They... Orcs!"
"They are not only orcs! They are Fire Demons,
the Ancient Demons!" yelled a knight.
"Watch out!" yelled
Edwards.
"Can't we kill
it?" shouted Elisabeth.
"I will try!" yelled Mary.
She shot at a Fire Demon but the arrows melted.
"We cannot hurt it!" yelled
Edwards.
"Try to use the weapons of
atomies!" yelled Elisabeth.
"It was melt by it!" yelled
Mary when she shot at a Fire Demon by atomies arrow.
"Kill it! My dragon!" yelled
a knight.
"AWWWWW!" the
dragon spew
out some fire and hit the demon.
"AAAAA," yelled the knight.
He used his lance to hit the demon.
"AWWWWWWWWWR," shouted the
demon. The orcs used their arrows to hit the dragon.
"AAAAAA," yelled the knight.
He pulled out the melting lance and used his sword to cut the
demon's neck.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!"
shouted the Demon. It was killed by the
knight and the orcs all ran
away.
"It's a good
job," said Elisabeth when the
knight climbed down
from the dying dragon, "I will find one (what
one?) in Sidem when we go back and give it to
you."
"That is the Stone Cove,
right?" said William.
"Yes, it is. Oh! The Fire Demons
again!" yelled Elisabeth.
"They come to stop us!"
yelled Edwards.
"Doesn't Sandor get other
things to stop us?" shouted William.
"We cannot kill them! They are much stronger
than the ones we met before!" shouted the
knight.
"The Fire Demons, you can't
melt us because we are made of stone!" the stone
army all ran out from the cove and fought against the Fire
Demons.
"We can help you, the person who holds the
King's sword!" said a stone man
to Elisabeth.
"We were human beings who were
working for
Sandor, but in the Minadusidy Battle, we felt that Sandor was very
evil so we didn't fight for him. So he lost the
battle. He was very angry to us and so he killed all of us, but he
punished us to do not die. Cyrano killed Sandor but
Sandor's
punishment didn't
stop. He turned us into stones before he died. But when he died,
the
punishment became weak and so we can walk and think. We wanted
to find the way to destroy Sandor, so we were
waiting for
King's sword."
"I want to find the
Unicorn's Knights," said
Elisabeth, "so we need your
help."
"Ok," said a stone man,
"the stone man can do anything for their
master!"
"How many soldiers have we
got?" asked Elisabeth.
"About 7000, I bit," said
William.
"Oh, we need more than 10000 soldiers to
attack The Demon's Cove," said
Elisabeth.
"You want to help Titan to escape from
there!" said William, "we can!
Look, we can get 5000 soldiers from the Unicorn's
Knight!"
"Ok, now our army will be much
bigger!" said Elisabeth.
"Wait, what is that sound?"
asked Edwards.
"Orcs!" yelled William.
"And also giant spiders!"
yelled Mary.
"What are we
waiting for!"
yelled William, "let's
fight!"
"AWWWW," yelled Edwards,
"it's really a big...
Sandor!"
"He comes to stop us!"
yelled Mary, she shoots Sandor.
"You are right," yelled
Sandor, "I will kill you
all!"
"I will hit you!" yelled a
stone man.
"And I will smash you into
pieces!" shouted Sandor. He cut the stone man
into half.
"AWWW," yelled William. He
ran to Sandor.
"YAAA," yelled Sandor.
He's right arm was hit by William.
"AWWWW," yelled William. His
sword hit Sandor's heart, and Sandor walked
back.
"Aw," said Sandor,
"you... No!"
Elisabeth hit his left arm and cut off his hand.
"You cannot kill me! My bangle will not be
easily cut!" yelled Sandor. He pulled out a gold
stone.
"The Braun Stone, you can give me your
greatest treasure!" he yelled.
Suddenly, the stone started to shine.
"Watch out!" yelled a stone
man.
The winds were coming and everything started to move.
"And now! I am going to control the
world!" yelled Sandor.
"Cut off his left arm!"
yelled Mary.
But it seemed too late. Sandor was laughing. It seemed like he
had done his work. The darkness was coming . No one could see
anything...
Chapter 6
It seemed like the end of the world. Sandor pulled out his sword
and walked to Elisabeth.
"And now the human beings are going to
end!" he yelled.
"YOU-ARE-WRONG!" yelled
William. He ran to Sandor in the darkness.
"AWWWW!" yelled Sandor.
William hit him and made him paralyzed.
Suddenly, the darkness was gone. William saw a girl
standing in
front of him. Sandor's arm was cut by Elisabeth.
But Sandor did not die.
The ground started to move. The land got a big gap and the
bangle fell into the gap. Sandor picked up his stone and
disappeared.
"Sandor didn't
die," said Mary, "he was just
badly injured by us."
"But how can he leave the bangle and get his
body?" asked Edwards.
"It's the
stone," said Elisabeth, "I
wanted to hit the stone after I cut off Sandor's
arm but he pushed me and so I can't do
it."
"That means him..." asked
William.
"He can live without the
bangle." said Elisabeth.
"But how..." said Mary.
"She's
it!" yelled a man riding on a unicorn.
"Did we come late?" asked
another man.
"I think so," said the first
man, "Sandor might run
away."
"Who are you?" asked
William.
"They are the Unicorn's
Knight!" yelled Elisabeth.
"And you might be
Elisabeth," said a Unicorn's
Knight, "We have two letters for
you."
"Look," said another
Knight.
Dear My Queen,
The orcs are coming to attack us. But
don't worry. I have a plan. I know that you are
making an army, so I write to Iliam and ask him how you can
win.
Iliam told me that he has a plan and also he has written a
letter to you. He sends 5000 elfs to help me.
Ludis Dormer
"What!" yelled Elisabeth,
"the orcs are attacking
Sidem?"
"Read the next letter," said
the Knight.
To Queen Elisabeth,
I have heard about the things happen in Sidem.
Don't worry, I send 5000 elfs to fight. I know
that you have met Sandor and so I let the
Unicorn's Knight to send you this letter. I found
why Sandor didn't die when you cut his bangle
off. Remember the Braun Stone, it was made from gold. It was made
of Twoploo. Twoploo was a kind of gold. Sandor melts the gold which
was picking in the Mount of Demon in the Volcano of Death. He mixed
the lava and gold and made a kind of stone called Wapiluka. He used
the Wapiluka to mix with the melted diamond and silver and made the
Braun Stone. The stone can make armies of orcs and also evil
powers. Sandor used the stone to be his greatest treasure. He will
not die if the stone is not destroyed. But I have found something:
he made a rope of gold, if the stone is destroyed and he is killed
by someone, the rope will disappear. And it saves the power of
evil. Sandor can live in the rope. The rope will be a mystery. I
will tell you the plan. Go and destroy Demon's
Cove and find the Braun Stone. You also need to rescue
Titan.
Iliam
"Ok, I bet it's time to
attack Demon's Cove," said
William.
"But how many armies do we
have?" asked Mary.
"It's now about
15000," said Edwards.
"That's
it," said Elisabeth, "go to
Demon's Cove!"
Chapter 7
It was in Minadusidy. Human beings were ready to fight with
orcs.
"How many orcs do they
have?" asked Ludis to a minister.
"About 50000," said the
minister.
"Then how many soldiers do we
have?" asked Ludis.
"About 1500. If the elfs come, it will be
6500."
"It's so
weak," said Ludis, "we need to
call Romantia and Lopudish for help."
"Ouch," an old
minister came
in, "we can also call Kasting and
Frolimlods."
"And Madianu and Vierk!"
yelled another minister.
"Ok," said Ludis,
"push the bell for help!"
"DONG,
DONG!"
"What is that sound?" asked
Mary.
"It's the bell of
Sidem!" yelled Elisabeth,
"Sidem is
calling for
help!"
"Look," yelled Edwards,
"a giant bird is flying to you,
Elisabeth!"
WHOOOSE! The bird threw a letter to Elisabeth. Elisabeth picked
the letter up.
To Elisabeth,
I know that you will win but you need to light the fire on
the Castle of Demon, so the orcs will leave
Minadusidy.
Iliam
"Ok," said William,
"it is a great plan."
The orcs were coming to Minadusidy.
"Give them some rocks!"
yelled an orcs.
The rocks came and hit Minadusidy. The city was crashing and
everyone hid into the mountain.
"Give them more rocks!"
yelled the orcs.
More rocks hit Minadusidy. Ludis was worried.
"The Kastings should come in 10 hours, but we
can't see them!" he yelled to a
soldier who was
holding a telescope, "can you see
them?"
"I can see some fires burning in the
east," said the soldier.
"That means Sandor knew we are
calling for
help and told the orcs to stop us!" shouted
Ludis, "look, the elfs are
coming!"
"I can see Iliam!" yelled
the soldier, "he comes!"
"How come they are so fast?"
asked Ludis.
"They have got unicorns!"
yelled the soldier, "AWWW!" He
was hit by a golden arrow.
"More orcs are coming!"