这篇文章本来是帮我一个同学改的,可是到了后面定感想部分差不多全变成我的了,因为我想把文章写得更加有深度一点,希望大家不吝赐教!all the advice is welcome here!

深圳大学 赖小琪

A letter to the editor of a newspaper

Dear editor,

I'm writing to share with you my experience in a bookstore that happened before long. Recently, I brought an English dictionary which I had been yearning for a long time. The minute i returned to my dormitory, I could not help using it, only to find that a number of pages were so blurred that I could hardly identify the words distinctly. Worse still, some pages were missing. Hence, the next day, harboring an indignant heart, I went back to the store and required that they should either replace it with a good one or refund me . However, surprisingly as well as annoyingly, the shop assistant argued that since the book had been sold to me, it was my responsibility and none of their business whatsoever happened to it. Needless to say, my rational request for a new one was rudely rejected. Disappointed and helpless, I had to leave the bookstore.

Nowadays it is commonly heard that customers are God. Today I really know what God really is. In this commercially developed society, while many loyal businesses are actually firmly upholding the banner of consumerism, there are innumerable shops or supermarkets that have thrown it away and hurt consumers' benefits for the sake of their own profits. To pursue the maximum margins, they even sacrifice consumes' health by offeringdefective or inferior products. We have launched a lot of relevant laws and acts to prevent such deeds and protect consumers, but those conscienceless businessmen still find their own places to locate themselves. Why? As far as I see, the reasons are as follows.

To begin with, our legislation system is still far from perfect and our legislatives are desperately required to consummate it.

Secondly, our law executor should harshly execute our legislation and impose penalty on those who break the law! Once finding some businesses are producing illegally, especially those in the food industry, the government and the relevant organizations should forbid their operation and amerce them accordingly, so as to sustain the normally running market.

Furthermore, we should reinforce the supervision of our media. As is known to all, media such as newspaper, TV, internet and so on, are sensitive to the change of our society and can reach a more distant point that has been neglected by the public and the government. On the basis of its distinct characteristics, media can uncovercountless truths about all aspects of our current society. In this way, we can be well informed and act accordingly to protect our rights and benefits. Besides, it is widely acknowledged that reputation is the key to success in business world. Therefore, if a company exercise some lawless activities, such as producing some defective goods and low-quality food, then once revealed, its merchandise will be strongly rejected by all consumers. Worst of all, the company may go bankrupt and never recover again.

Last but not the least, to my mind, publicity is an indispensable measure to the overall plan. We should strongly advocate all businesses to conform to the law, and meantime, consolidate the self-protection conception of vast consumers. Also, the government can call for the public to jointly supervise all the local shops and stores. Only by implementing the measures I mention above can we truly build up a smoothly running market!

Dear editor, I hope you can publish my article and make more people aware of this pressing issue that is waiting to be tackle. I am craving for the day when every customer can authentically enjoy the feeling of being a God.

Looking forward to your timely reply!

Best wishes

Yours sincerely

Fan Kangshi
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