Where are the strong arms in which I, too, might lay me and repose,
and yet be full of the fire of life? And always through the twilight
come answers from the other world, `Master! Master! there is one -- Christ --
in His arms we rest!'"*3* Perhaps, however, Lanier's notion of God,
whom he declared*4* all his roads reached, is most clearly expressed
in a scrap quoted by Ward,
apparently the
outline for a poem:
"I fled in tears from the men's ungodly quarrel about God.
I fled in tears to the woods, and laid me down on the earth.
Then somewhat like the
beating of many hearts came up to me out of the ground;
and I looked and my cheek lay close to a
violet. Then my heart took courage,
and I said: `I know that thou art the word of my God, dear Violet.
And oh, the
ladder is not long that to my heaven leads.
Measure what space a
violet stands above the ground. 'Tis no further climbing
that my soul and angels have to do than that.'"*5* In this high spirituality
Lanier is in line with the greatest poets of our race, from
"Caedmon, in the morn
A-
calling angels with the cow-herd's call
That late brought up the cattle,"*6*
to him
"Who never turned his back, but marched breast forward,
Never doubted clouds would break,
Never dreamed, though right were worsted, wrong would triumph,
Held we fall to rise, are baffled to fight better,
Sleep to wake."*7*
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*1* 1 John 4:16.
*2* `The Crystal', ll. 100-111.
*3* Hayne's `A Poet's Letters to a Friend'.
*4* In `A Florida Sunday', l. 85.
*5* Ward's `Memorial', p. xxxix.
*6* Lanier's `The Crystal', ll. 90-93.
*7* Browning's `Asolando': Epilogue, ll. 11-15.
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Perhaps I may append here a
paragraph upon Lanier's criticisms
of other writers, for they seem to me acute in the extreme.
Despite the
elaborate essays in defence of Whitman's
poetryby Dowden,*1* Symonds,*2* and Whitman himself, I believe Lanier is right
in declaring that "Whitman is
poetry's
butcher. Huge raw collops
slashed from the rump of
poetry and never mind gristle --
is what Whitman feeds our souls with. As near as I can make it out,
Whitman's
argument seems to be, that, because a
prairie is wide,
therefore debauchery is
admirable, and because the Mississippi is long,
therefore every American is God."*3* Notice, again, how well
the
defect of `Paradise Lost' is
pointed out:
"And I forgive
Thee, Milton, those thy comic-dreadful wars
Where, armed with gross and inconclusive steel,
Immortals smite immortals mortalwise
And fill all heaven with folly."*4*
Few better things have been said of Langland than this, --
"That with but a touch
Of art hadst sung Piers Plowman to the top
Of English songs,
whereof 'tis dearest, now
And most adorable;"*5*
or of Emerson than this, --
"Most wise, that yet, in
finding Wisdom, lost
Thy Self, sometimes;"*6*
or of Tennyson than this, --
"Largest voice
Since Milton, yet some
register of wit
Wanting."*7*
`The Crystal' abounds in such happy characterizations.
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*1* See Dowden's `Studies in Literature', pp. 468-523.
*2* See Symonds's `Walt Whitman: A Study'. London, 1893.
*3* Ward's `Memorial', p. xxxviii.
*4* `The Crystal', ll. 66-70.
*5* Ibid., ll. 87-90.
*6* Ibid., ll. 93-94.
*7* Ibid., ll. 95-97.
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IV. Lanier's Poetry: Its Style
So much for the poet's thoughts; what shall we say of their expression?
In other words, is Lanier the
literary artist equal to Lanier the seer?
In order the better to answer this question, let us begin at the beginning,
with the elements of style, some of which, however, I pass by
as not
calling for special comment.
Of Lanier's felicitous choice of words we have already had
incidental
illustration; but it is
desirable, perhaps, to group here
a few of his happiest phrases, to show that, as Lowell*1* said,
he is "a man of
genius with a rare gift for the happy word."
Notice this speech about the brook:
"And down the hollow from a ferny nook
`Lull' sings a little brook!"*2*
and this of the well-
bucket:
"The rattling
bucket plumps
Souse down the well;"*3*
and this of the
outburst of a bird:
"Dumb woods, have ye uttered a bird?"*4*
and the
description of a mocking-bird as
"Yon trim Shakspere on the tree;"*5*
and of
midnight as
"Death's and truth's unlocking time."*6*
Moreover, it should be observed that Lanier
frequently uses
significant compounds, -- a habit acquired, no doubt,
from his study of Old English, in which, as in German, such compounds abound.
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*1* See `Lowell' in `Bibliography'.
*2* `From the Flats', ll. 23-24; cited by Gates. [Line 24 was changed
(to "Bright leaps a living brook!") in later editions. -- A. L., 1998.]
*3* `Clover', ll. 29-30.
*4* `Sunrise', l. 57; cited by Gates.
*5* `The Mocking-Bird', l. 14.
*6* `The Crystal', l. 1. Other
illustrations may be found in the
paragraphon figures of speech.
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occasionally his sentences are too long, as in `My Springs',
`To Bayard Taylor', and `Sunrise', in which we have sentences
longer than the
opening one in `Paradise Lost', and, what is of more moment,
not so well balanced, and hence affording fewer breathing spaces.
That this detracts from
clearness and euphony both, every reader will admit.
To come to the figures of speech, one must be struck at once
with the
delicacy and the vigor of Lanier's
imagination. The poet's fancy
personifies what at first blush seems to us
incapable of personification.
Thus at one time*1* he likens men to clover-leaves and the Course-of-things
to the browsing ox, which makes way with the clover-heads;
while at another he addresses an old red hill of Georgia as
"Thou gashed and hairy Lear
Whom the
divine Cordelia of the year,
E'en pitying Spring, will
vainlystrive to cheer."*2*
Like other Southern poets,*3* Lanier sometimes fails to check his
imagination,
and in
consequence leaves his readers "bramble-tangled in a
brilliant maze,"
as in his
description of the stars in `June Dreams'*4*
and in the `Psalm of the West'.*5* While I do not like a maze,
brilliant though it be and sweet, I must say that I prefer
the
embarrassment of
riches to the
embarrassment of
poverty. On the whole,
however, Lanier's figures strike me as singularly fresh and happy.
In `Sunrise', for example, the poet speaks of the marsh as follows: