组织段落的常见方法有:1)时间顺序;2)空间顺序;3)重要性顺序和;4)熟悉度顺序。在前几单元,我们曾提到写叙述段落和过程分析时用时间顺序,写描述段落时用空间顺序。在这一单元里,我们将着重讨论这两种组织方法。另两种方法--重要性和熟悉度顺序--将在第19单元讨论。
12.1时间顺序法
段落内组织细节的最简单最常见的方法是时间顺序法(time order organization)。时间顺序通常用于叙述和过程分析--先发生什么,然后怎样,再然后怎样,等等。正如我们在示范段落9-1和示范段落11-1所看到的一样。其实在你的生活中你经常运用这种方法。你也许曾经告诉你父母在学校里发生的事情。你也许向老师或同学叙述过你是
怎样做一个实验的。这些用的都是时间顺序。
12.2关于如何写时间顺序段落的建议
1)写下你要记录的事件或步骤,然后按照时间顺序排列
2)确定你的
写作目的,然后写出带有中心思想的主题句
3)从你列举的事件或步骤中删除与中心思想无关的细节
4)使用"first,then,the next step"等等列举符号把细节连接起来
12.3空间顺序法
段落组织的另一方法是空间顺序法(space order organization)。空间顺序主要用于描述,正如我们在示范段落10-1和示范段落10-2所看到的。空间顺序和时间顺序一样,是生活中经常使用的方法。你也许曾在信中向你父母描述你的学院,或向你的同学描述一个风景区。
12.4关于如何写空间顺序段落的建议
按照你想让你的读者了解你要描绘的场面的方式移动--例如,从左到右,或从背景到前景,或按顺时针方向,等等。
12.5综合运用空间顺序和时间顺序
有时候,尤其在描写参观时,有必要同时运用空间顺序和时间顺序,以增强段落的统一性。
示范段落12-1
We enjoyed our visit to Dr Hassan's house,perched high up on a hill.Walking up the long driveway,we approached the huge
bronze door.A
butler was standing in the open doorway,ushering guests into the house.Going in,we passed the oak-pannelled library and the formal dining room before we arrived at the ballroom,where the
reception was being held.Under three sparkling chandeliers,more than a hundred people were enjoying champagne,hors d'oeuvres and good conversation.
12.6示范段落分析
主题句:We enjoyed our visit to Dr Hassan's house.
时间空间顺序:driveway→door→house→library→diningroom→ballroom
Exercise 12-1
Directions:Arrange the sentences into a paragraph,using the time order and adding the necessary listing signals.
-She never had a birthday party and she was twenty-one year sold.
-The party was really a successful one.
-We planned to serve fruit punch and coffee.
-We planned entertainment.
-We carefully made a guest list.
-We planned a surprise party for Mary recently.
-We included many of her friends from school,a few of her friends from her neighbourhood,and all of her brothers and sisters.
-A boy did mayic tricks skillfully;another boy played the
guitar well.
-We also wanted chicken sandwiches,a birthday cake with twenty-one candles,and ice cream.
-We especially enjoyed the group singing.
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Exercise 12-2
Directions:Narrate an incident from your own childhood in which you behave in a way you later regretted,using time order.
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Exercise 12-3
Directions:Narrate one of your trip,either by bike,by bus or bytrain,combining time order and space order.
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