酷兔英语

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.



改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.



2. For example, you work in a big factory.



改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.



3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.



改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.



4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.



改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.



5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.



改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.



6. Their brain is still very young.



改进: They are still immature.



7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.



改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.



8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.



改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.



9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.



改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.



10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.



改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.
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