The Art of Writing
by Robert Louis Stevenson
CONTENTS
I. ON SOME TECHNICAL ELEMENTS OF STYLE IN LITERATURE
II. THE MORALITY OF THE PROFESSION OF LETTERS
III. BOOKS WHICH HAVE INFLUENCED ME
IV. A NOTE ON REALISM
V. MY FIRST BOOK: 'TREASURE ISLAND'
VI. THE GENESIS OF 'THE MASTER OF BALLANTRAE'
VII. PREFACE TO 'THE MASTER OF BALLANTRAE'
CHAPTER I - ON SOME TECHNICAL ELEMENTS OF STYLE IN LITERATURE
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THERE is nothing more disenchanting to man than to be shown
the springs and
mechanism of any art. All our arts and
occupations lie
wholly on the surface; it is on the surface
that we
perceive their beauty,
fitness, and
significance; and
to pry below is to be appalled by their emptiness and shocked
by the coarseness of the strings and pulleys. In a similar
way,
psychology itself, when pushed to any nicety, discovers
an abhorrent baldness, but rather from the fault of our
analysis than from any
poverty native to the mind. And
perhaps in aesthetics the reason is the same: those
disclosures which seem fatal to the
dignity of art seem so
perhaps only in the
proportion of our
ignorance; and those
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unconscious artifices which it seems unworthy
of the serious artist to employ were yet, if we had the power
to trace them to their springs, indications of a
delicacy of
the sense finer than we
conceive, and hints of ancient
harmonies in nature. This
ignorance at least is largely
irremediable. We shall never learn the affinities of beauty,
for they lie too deep in nature and too far back in the
mysterious history of man. The
amateur, in
consequence, will
always grudgingly receive details of method, which can be
stated but never can
wholly be explained; nay, on the
principle laid down in HUDIBRAS, that
'Still the less they understand,
The more they admire the sleight-of-hand,'
many are
conscious at each new disclosure of a diminution in
the
ardour of their pleasure. I must
therefore warn that
well-known
character, the general reader, that I am here
embarked upon a most
distasteful business:
taking down the
picture from the wall and looking on the back; and, like the
inquiring child, pulling the
musical cart to pieces.
1. CHOICE OF WORDS. - The art of
literature stands apart
from among its sisters, because the material in which the
literary artist works is the
dialect of life; hence, on the
one hand, a strange
freshness and immediacy of address to the
public mind, which is ready prepared to understand it; but
hence, on the other, a
singularlimitation. The sister arts
enjoy the use of a plastic and ductile material, like the
modeller's clay;
literature alone is condemned to work in
mosaic with finite and quite rigid words. You have seen
these blocks, dear to the
nursery: this one a
pillar, that a
pediment, a third a window or a vase. It is with blocks of
just such
arbitrary size and figure that the
literaryarchitect is condemned to design the palace of his art. Nor
is this all; for since these blocks, or words, are the
acknowledged
currency of our daily affairs, there are here
possible none of those suppressions by which other arts
obtain
relief, continuity, and
vigour: no hieroglyphic
touch, no smoothed impasto, no inscrutable shadow, as in
painting; no blank wall, as in
architecture; but every word,
phrase,
sentence, and
paragraph must move in a logical
progression, and
convey a
definiteconventional import.
Now the first merit which attracts in the pages of a good
writer, or the talk of a
brilliant conversationalist, is the
apt choice and
contrast of the words employed. It is,
indeed, a strange art to take these blocks,
rudelyconceived
for the purpose of the market or the bar, and by tact of
application touch them to the finest meanings and
distinctions,
restore to them their primal
energy, wittily
shift them to another issue, or make of them a drum to rouse
the passions. But though this form of merit is without doubt
the most
sensible and seizing, it is far from being equally
present in all
writers. The effect of words in Shakespeare,
their
singular justice,
significance, and
poetic charm, is
different, indeed, from the effect of words in Addison or
Fielding. Or, to take an example nearer home, the words in
Carlyle seem electrified into an
energy of lineament, like
the faces of men
furiously moved;
whilst the words in
Macaulay, apt enough to
convey his meaning,
harmonious enough
in sound, yet glide from the memory like un
distinguished
elements in a general effect. But the first class of
writers
have no
monopoly of
literary merit. There is a sense in
which Addison is superior to Carlyle; a sense in which Cicero
is better than Tacitus, in which Voltaire excels Montaigne:
it certainly lies not in the choice of words; it lies not in
the interest or value of the matter; it lies not in force of
intellect, of
poetry, or of
humour. The three first are but
infants to the three second; and yet each, in a particular
point of
literary art, excels his superior in the whole.
What is that point?
2. THE WEB. - Literature, although it stands apart by reason
of the great
destiny and general use of its
medium in the
affairs of men, is yet an art like other arts. Of these we
may
distinguish two great classes: those arts, like
sculpture,
painting,
acting, which are representative, or, as
used to be said very clumsily, imitative; and those, like
architecture, music, and the dance, which are self-
sufficient, and merely presentative. Each class, in right of
this
distinction, obeys principles apart; yet both may claim
a common ground of
existence, and it may be said with
sufficient justice that the
motive and end of any art
whatever is to make a pattern; a pattern, it may be, of
colours, of sounds, of changing attitudes, geometrical
figures, or imitative lines; but still a pattern. That is
the plane on which these sisters meet; it is by this that
they are arts; and if it be well they should at times forget
their
childishorigin, addressing their
intelligence to
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unconsciously that necessary
function of their life, to make a pattern, it is still
imperative that the pattern shall be made.
Music and
literature, the two temporal arts,
contrive their
pattern of sounds in time; or, in other words, of sounds and
pauses. Communication may be made in broken words, the
business of life be carried on with substantives alone; but
that is not what we call
literature; and the true business of
the
literary artist is to plait or weave his meaning,
involving it around itself; so that each
sentence, by
successivephrases, shall first come into a kind of knot, and
then, after a moment of suspended meaning, solve and clear
itself. In every
properly constructed
sentence there should
be observed this knot or hitch; so that (however delicately)
we are led to
foresee, to expect, and then to
welcome the
successivephrases. The pleasure may be heightened by an
element of surprise, as, very grossly, in the common figure
of the antithesis, or, with much greater
subtlety, where an
antithesis is first suggested and then
deftly evaded. Each
phrase, besides, is to be
comely in itself; and between the
implication and the
evolution of the
sentence there should be
a satisfying equipoise of sound; for nothing more often
disappoints the ear than a
sentencesolemnly and sonorously
prepared, and
hastily and weakly finished. Nor should the
balance be too
striking and exact, for the one rule is to be
infinitely various; to interest, to
disappoint, to surprise,
and yet still to
gratify; to be ever changing, as it were,
the
stitch, and yet still to give the effect of an ingenious