这篇作文条理清晰，语言流畅，很值得借鉴，尤其是定语从句的运用。

Olympic Games in Beijing

　　What a Great Olympic Games!

　　The 29th Olympic Games has been over in Beijing，China on August 24，2008，which has left a great impression on the whole world. About 204 countries and regions attended the Olympic Games. In the Games，our Chinese athletes have won 51 gold medals，while America，36;Russia，23. This is the first time that we，Chinese athletes have won so many gold medals in one Olympic Games，which means our sports games belong to the first class in the world!

　　It is our athletes' intelligence and other qualities that have won the great honor for us Chinese all!Days when we were looked down upon have gone forever!From the very Games， we have proved that our government has the ability to hold the Olympic Games successfully!Not only can we hold the Olympic Games well，but also we can perform well. The fact has showed everything to the world!It is the successful 29th Olympic Games that destroys the saying of those who doubted about it days ago!What a great， successful and impressive Olympic Games!