写求职信的目的在于获得职位,一封求职信无论如何文辞并茂,令人心动,公司HR主管不见到应聘者本人是不会给予工作机会的。因此,求职信的实际目的在于获得面谈的机会。许多人都会copy网上的求职信范本,导致千篇一律,这是非常不可取的。我们已经讲过怎样写求职信,这次我们来谈谈求职信写作中容易被忽略的细节问题。 一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的,有些专家认为不宜用分词句子,比如用下面的句子做开头,因为这样的句子被人用得大多,显得陈腐,失去特点。 Replying to your advertisement... 来源:考Answering your advertisement... Believing that there is an opportunity... 来源:考Thinking that there is a
vacancy in your company... Having read your ad... 来源:考再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。 A: (1) Replying to your recent
advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager. 来源:考(2) I am applying for the position of sales manager. I believe my qualifications will meet your
exacting requirements. 来源:考B: (1) I believe after
reading your
advertisement in this morning's Journal that you are
offering just the opportunity I am looking for. 来源:考(2) Your
advertisement in this morning's Journal for an
adjustmentmanager prompted me to apply for this position. 来源:考C: (1) Having read your
advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application. 来源:考(2) In your
advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a
competent person, with
thorough training in the field of cost accounting. Please consider me an
applicant for the position. Here are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this work.