Example 12
She was born with a silver spoon in her mouth; she thinks she can do what she likes.
她生长在富贵之家,认为凡事都可以随心所欲。 (Zhang, 1980: 163)
(My back
translation: She was born in a wealthy family....)
Example 13
He who keeps company wtih the wolf will learn to howl"
近朱者赤,近墨者黑。 (Guo, 1996: 183)
(My back
translation: He who touches vermillion will be reddened, and he who deals with
ink will be blackened.)
Example 14
Great men are not always wise.
人有失手日,马有失蹄时。(Guo, 1996: 182-3)
(My back
translation: Men will make mistakes, horses all stumble.)
4.2 Analysis
The analysis is based on the following five common
translation methods: (1) Literal
translation (retaining the same image in the
target language); (2) Replacing the SL image with a standard TL image; (3) Literal
translation plus sense and explanation; (4) Converting the metaphor to meaning; (5) Using Chinese couplets to replace the English metaphor.
Metaphors in examples 1, 2, 3 and 6 are
translated
literally. The aim of literal
translation is to retain the national or local colour, the original images as well as the foreign expressions so as to
enrich the
target language . (Zhang, 1980: 161). "To his ancestors" (Example 1) "去见祖先" , is a euphemism for "to die". This expression is vivid and easy for the ordinary Chinese reader to understand. "Armed to the teeth" (Example 2) "武装到牙齿" sounds a bit exaggerating but very
impressive. The image of a person armed to the teeth is so
picturesque that it is hard for the
target language reader to forget. This literal
translation has been widely accepted since New China was established.
"A more common
procedure for translating metaphors is to replace the SL image with another established TL image, if one exists that is equally frequent within the register" (Newmark, 1988: 109). The
proverbs in examples 4,5, and 7, are all adapted into Chinese
versions, replacing the SL images with TL images which are familiar to the Chinese reader. These Chinese images are widely different from but similar in sense to the original ones . Perhaps it is all right to render the
proverb in example 4 "among the blind the one-eyed man is king"
literally into "盲人之中单眼汉为王", because the meaning as well as the image is clear. But the
proverb "One boy is a boy, two boys half a boy, three boys no boy" is a concept rather than an image, if it is
translated
literally, it would be wordy and may not be able to impress the Chinese reader as strongly as the converted
version.
There has been some arguments about the
translation of the metaphorical
saying "Talking of the devil, and he will appear". Some (Zhang, 1980; Lu, 1993) believe that it is
acceptable to convert it into "说到曹操,曹操就到" because this figurative expression is known to all, while others (Guo, 1996; Li, 1995) think that Caocao is a national figure in the Chinese history who represents certain features of the Chinese culture. If the original text is about western culture and western people, it would be inappropriate to bring CaoCao into the scene. Perhaps that is why Li and his colleagues
decided to
translate it
literally into "说鬼鬼到" ( Example 6).
The
translation method
applied to metaphors in examples 8, 11 and 12 is "free
translation" (the usual Chinese term) or in Newmark's words, converting the metaphor to sense. To the Chinese reader, the image of "a
skeleton in the
cupboard", may mean ugly, horrible and frightening; "a wet blanket" is merely a blanket which is soaked with water, and "a silver spoon" is just a spoon different from a china spoon. They may not be able to understand the referential meanings these images carry in the metaphors. Most probably for this reason the metaphors are all converted to sense, to more general expressions, "family scandal" (家丑) , "a disappointment" (令人扫兴的人) and "a wealthy family"(富贵之家) which are
abstract concepts rather than
concrete images. Snell Hornby is right in
saying that "as an
abstract concept, metaphor might be universal; in its
concrete realization however, being closely linked with sensuous
perception and culture-bound value judgments, it is undoubtedly complicated by language-
specific idiosyncrasies" (1988: 62-3).
The metaphor in Example 9 is the same as that in Example 8, but is treated
differently. Actually, there has been some arguments about the
translation of this metaphorical phrase. In an article written in 1981, Feng Shize says that if the English idiom "
skeleton in the
cupboard" is
translated
literally into "衣柜里的骷髅", the Chinese reader might not understand what it means, so he suggested to render it to sense. In another article written later in the same year, Xu Shigu (徐世谷) does not
subscribe to Feng's opinion. He argues that if the first translator of the metaphor "the
crocodile's tears" thought in the same way as Feng, the Chinese reader would not have been able to understand the image, neither could the expression be able to get into the Chinese vocabulary. Xu proposed translating it
literally plus meaning or explanation. But it took a long time for people to accept the "
skeleton" image:. In the English-Chinese Dictionary (unabridged) , the standard dictionary of this kind in China, the
translation of the metaphor is nearly the same as Feng's. It was not until 1992 had the "the
skeleton" image been directly brought into the Chinese culture, although with a brief
interpretation to reveal its implied meaning (see Example 9).
The
translation of "To carry coals to Newcastle" indicates another common problem. Zhang and his colleagues
translate this metaphor
literally into "运煤到纽卡?quot; and then add the referential meaning "多此一举" (making an unnecessary move). Still they assume that it can not be understood completely because the reader may not know what "Newcastle" means, so they suggest making a note to identify this place rich in coal.
In the last two examples, we see that "He who keeps company with the wolf will learn to howl" is turned into "近朱者赤,近墨者黑" (He who touches vermilion will be reddened, and he who deals with ink will be blackened); "Great men are not always wise" becomes "人有失手日,马有失蹄时" (Men will make mistakes, horses all stumble). There is a change of image and references in both
translations. Antithetical couplets are a special feature in the Chinese culture. When the Chinese couplets are used to render the English
proverbs, the
translated
version often bring in more images than the original although the philosophy of the
proverb remains the same.
5. Findings and implications
Are SL culture
specific expressions replaced purely and simply or are they more often than not retained in Chinese
translations? My investigation shows neither. From the above examples of metaphor
translation and analysis, we can see that methods 1 and 3 ( literal
translation; literal
translation plus sense and explanation) are
practiced with the concept of foreignization. The translator "
deliberately breaks
target conventions by retaining something of the foreigness of the original" (Shuttleworth &Cowie, 1997:59). The translator's choice, in Venuti's words, is an ethno-deviant pressure on
target language values "to register the
linguistic and cultural difference of the foreign text, sending the reader abroad" (1993: 20).
Methods 2, 4 and 5 (Replacing the SL image with a standard TL image; Converting the metaphor to meaning; using Chinese couplets to replace the English metaphor.) are domesticating strategies, in which "a
transparent, fluent style is adopted in order to
minimize the strangeness of the foreign text for
target language readers" (Shuttleworth &Cowie, 1997:59).
Then what makes the translator decide on the domesticating or foreignizing
strategy? My research shows that
(1) When the basic metaphorical concepts of SL and TL communities
correspond, as in "to our ancestors" and "armed to teeth", the original image or flavour is most likely to be retained.
(2) When they come cross SL
historical,
geographical or folk
heritage in cultural-
specific metaphors as such "to carry coals to Newcastle" and "a
skeleton in the
cupboard/closet", the Chinese translator would try very hard to find suitable solutions for them. The best solution so far is to retain the original image or cultural -
specific features with the support of
interpretations so that the implications of the story generally accepted by members of the culture
eventually get cross to the TL reader.
(3) The TL reader's
response is still a
significant criterion and the main consideration in metaphor
translation. When the associations of an image in the SL is
lacking in the TL, for
instance, "to be born with a silver in one's mouth", "a wet blanket", the translator tends to adapt the metaphor into idiomatic
target language expressions.
(4) When translating the English metaphor, particularly those embedded in
proverbs, such as "He who keeps company with the wolf will learn to howl" and "Great men are not always wise", the Chinese translator, more often than not, seeks for an
equivalent expression (e.g. a Chinese couplet) to replace the original, although the equivalence is sometimes far from accurate.
6. Conclusion
On examining the
translation of metaphor and the discussion of some of the problems involved, I have realized that different methods of
translation are changeable rather than fixed, contingent rather than eternal. Whether to use foreignizing or domesticating
strategy depends on different factors such as the importance and the contextual factors of the SL text, the consideration of referential
accuracy, the reader's acceptability and the "pragmatic economy" (Newmark, 1988b: 110). I believe there are special problems involved in the
translation of metaphor, but the theory of the
translation of metaphor is justifiable within the general theory of
translation. To sum up, in
translation practice, there is no foreignization without some degree of domestication, by the same token, there is no domestication without some degree of foreignization.
张美芳
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