3、因果论证式:首先说明对象造成的一个原因,然后引出对于现实生活中的影响和作用,最后对上述论证进行加固或者补充(对于论证中的可能漏洞进行弥补)。同样我们用范文向大家示范:
235."Most people are taught that
loyalty is a virtue. But
loyalty whether to one's friends, to one's school or place of employment, or to any institution is all too often a
destructive rather than a
positive force."
(范文)
Once I participated a speech given by a famous local
entrepreneur, who rose from exactly bare hands. The word brands me most is "
loyalty", the very one we hardly dabble and almost reaches the edge of
oblivion but instead no negligence is deserve. How can this concept
bridge the relation with the huge lope of his life? Loyalty makes one stick to a goal without any fickleness until achievement, which has won a lot much for him including friendship, dependability and love. Ironically, today's people is becoming more and more "sagacious" to plan for themselves better,
holding the principles of choosing best, moving fastest, and snatching most; in other words,
loyalty is degenerated into a totem of
stubborn stereotype inadaptable for the society of profits first.
Is that modern theory "true"? And what about the success of that admiring
entrepreneur? Something people
primarily should understand is the indispensability of credence active among human
community for the perpetuity of humanistic
relationship, which to a large extent stems from this
loyalty. No
exaggeration I have made to
emphasize its
paramount function to personal survival, either from the fable or history we can learn the lesson. But now I would like to continue to elicit the example of that manager
upstairs. When he is still an employee working for this consult company (before he climbed up to the top rung of the company committee), there was a huge recession leading to a total profits declination in this operating
domain, in the end results almost all elites of the company to make a job exchange except him. His
persistentdetermination was for nothing but
loyalty, of his indebtedness form his boss, of his enamored
taking" title="n.任务;事业;计划">
undertaking tolerating for no intermittence, of his adherence to goal successful for sure. And fact tells us everything, as each audience can see, he did.
Not only to individual the quality of
loyalty can push one into the acme of his career following with winsome
reputation, but also to
community the crucial
pillar to support the
sculpture of serenity goddess. Once separated from the
loyalty, credencealso accordingly right away being crushed under the wheels of history cart, and then the concomitant condition can be imagined as this: various associations would be certainly collapsed under the circumstance deprived of dependability, each one discredits the motive of action from anyone else, talking is evolved into a serial of satirical assaults,
compassion sounds more like a snicker, and
ultimately ineluctably the human society is degraded into a state of depravity. Is this the
community we each of us want to live in? Is this the situation we each of us want to make realized? If your answer is negative-just like mine-then please retrospect your conscience to retrieve this precious virtue of "
loyalty".
While the merits of
loyalty have been corroborated here so strongly, admittedly, however,
loyaltyapplied only to the
legitimate partner or purpose, not involves the malign ones, somehow or other the effect will surely arrive at the surprising reverse. For instance, from the point of penal law, excluding the major miscreants who abet the underlings to commit guilt, the
adherent to follow his felony, even if he never directly join in the crime doing on the spot, but as a result of his ancillary work, he should also assume a certain quantity of the great responsibility, which might mean him a
ferocity of being disenfranchised, or at the same time to enjoy his later few years' prime time in the jail. The tragedy is so natural for most of us that admonishing clock is being struck; the high time for us to wake up from the sequacious
loyalty is coming.
Overall, the virtue of
loyalty is one of the fundamental factor heading for our prosperous tomorrow, despite its contain of some
potential stygian side effect turning to the
maliciousdimension, yet no doubt it deserves to be advocated to learn for the brace of the
beneficial development of both single person and gross society. Like the rationale of any medicine we take
normally, no one of us will stopto ingest pills of penicillin just because its possible allergy to some particular patients, after all its application and efficacy is indelible. (700 words)
点评:这篇文章二段直接阐述原因,三段论述必要性,四段对其中的例外进行弥补,客观地指出非通用性,从而保证了全文强大的说服力。
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- eventually [i´ventʃuəli] ad.最后,终于 四级词汇
- impact [´impækt] n.影响,作用;冲击 六级词汇
- arrogance [´ærəgəns] n.傲慢;自大 六级词汇
- exceptionally [ik´sepʃənli] ad.异常地;极,很 六级词汇
- graduation [,grædʒu´eiʃən] n.毕业(典礼);刻度 六级词汇
- ultimately [´ʌltimitli] ad.最后,最终 四级词汇
- blasphemy [´blæsfimi] n.亵渎;辱骂 六级词汇
- gifted [´giftid] a.有天赋的,有才华的 四级词汇
- brilliance [´briljəns] n.光辉,辉煌 六级词汇
- violin [,vaiə´lin] n.(小)提琴 四级词汇
- experienced [ik´spiəriənst] a.有经验的;熟练的 四级词汇
- albeit [ɔ:l´bi:it] conj.即使;纵使;虽然 六级词汇
- authoritative [ɔ:´θɔrətətiv] a.可信的;命令的 四级词汇
- assertion [ə´sə:ʃən] n.断言;主张;论述 四级词汇
- beneficial [,beni´fiʃəl] a.有利的,有益的 四级词汇
- cultivated [´kʌltiveitid] a.在耕作的;有教养的 六级词汇
- priceless [´praisləs] a.无价的;贵重的 六级词汇
- civilian [si´viljən] n.平民 a.平民的 四级词汇
- normally [´nɔ:məli] ad.正常情况下;通常 六级词汇
- academic [,ækə´demik] a.学术的 n.大学学生 四级词汇
- benevolent [bi´nevələnt] a.仁慈的;乐善好施的 六级词汇
- respectively [ri´spektivli] ad.各自地;分别地 四级词汇
- idealism [ai´diəlizəm] n.唯心主义;理想主义 六级词汇
- status [´steitəs] n.身份;情形;状况 四级词汇
- competitive [kəm´petitiv] a.竞争的,比赛的 四级词汇
- eccentric [ik´sentrik] a.古怪的;离心的 六级词汇
- cavalier [,kævə´liə] n.骑士;勋章获得者 四级词汇
- fantasy [´fæntəsi] n.幻想(曲),想象 六级词汇
- desirous [di´zaiərəs] a.渴望的;想往的 四级词汇
- aspiration [,æspə´reiʃən] n.渴望;志向;抱负 四级词汇
- devoted [di´vəutid] a.献身…的,忠实的 四级词汇
- eternally [i:´tə:nli] ad.永久地;不朽地 六级词汇
- applied [ə´plaid] a.实用的,应用的 六级词汇
- populace [´pɔpjuləs] n.平民;大众;人口 六级词汇
- automatically [ɔ:tə´mætikli] ad.自动地;无意识地 四级词汇
- trying [´traiiŋ] a.难堪的;费劲的 四级词汇
- attainment [ə´teinmənt] n.达到;得到;造诣 六级词汇
- flexible [´fleksəbəl] a.灵活的,柔韧的 四级词汇
- taking [´teikiŋ] a.迷人的 n.捕获物 六级词汇
- billow [´biləu] n.巨浪 v.(使)翻腾 四级词汇
- acceptable [ək´septəbəl] a.可接受的;合意的 四级词汇
- mathematics [,mæθə´mætiks] n.数学 四级词汇
- compensate [´kɔmpenseit] v.赔偿;补偿;酬报 四级词汇
- traditional [trə´diʃənəl] a.传统的,习惯的 四级词汇
- calculation [,kælkju´leiʃən] n.计算;考虑,预料 四级词汇
- storehouse [´stɔ:haus] n.仓库;(知识的)宝库 四级词汇
- diagram [´daiəgræm] n.图解,图表 四级词汇
- domain [də´mein,dəu-] n.领土;版图;范围 四级词汇
- imminent [´iminənt] a.临头的,逼近的 六级词汇
- psyche [´saiki] n.心灵;灵魂;精神 六级词汇
- philosophical [,filə´sɔfikəl] a.哲学(上)的;冷静的 六级词汇
- biology [bai´ɔlədʒi] n.生物学,生态学 四级词汇
- hybrid [´haibrid] n.杂种;混合物 六级词汇
- systematic [,sisti´mætik] a.有系统的,成体系的 六级词汇
- exceptional [ik´sepʃənəl] a.异常的,特别的 四级词汇
- broaden [´brɔ:dn] v.(使)变宽;(使)扩大 六级词汇
- intensive [in´tensiv] a.加强的;精耕细作的 六级词汇
- reputation [repju´teiʃən] n.名誉;名声;信誉 四级词汇
- exclamation [,eksklə´meiʃən] n.喊(惊)叫;感叹词 四级词汇
- garbage [´gɑ:bidʒ] n.垃圾,废物 六级词汇
- collision [kə´liʒən] n.碰幢;冲突;互撞事件 六级词汇
- overwhelming [,əuvə´welmiŋ] a.压倒的;势不可挡的 四级词汇
- tolerate [´tɔləreit] vt.忍受;宽容 四级词汇
- privacy [´praivəsi, -pri] n.隐退;独处;秘密 四级词汇
- awakening [ə´weikəniŋ] n.&a.觉醒(中的) 六级词汇
- similarly [´similəli] ad.类似地,同样地 四级词汇
- disappearance [,disə´piərəns] n.消失;失踪 六级词汇
- magical [´mædʒikəl] a.有魔术的,神奇的 六级词汇
- destructive [di´strʌktiv] a.破坏性的 四级词汇
- entrepreneur [,ɔntrəprə´nə:] n.企业家,创业者 六级词汇
- oblivion [ə´bliviən] n.(被)忘却;漠视 六级词汇
- bridge [bridʒ] n.桥(梁);鼻梁;桥牌 四级词汇
- holding [´həuldiŋ] n.保持,固定,存储 六级词汇
- primarily [´praimərəli, prai´merəli] ad.首先;主要地 四级词汇
- exaggeration [ig,zædʒə´reiʃən] n.夸张,夸大 六级词汇
- paramount [´pærəmaunt] a.最高的 n.元首 六级词汇
- upstairs [,ʌp´steəz] ad.在楼上 a.楼上的 四级词汇
- compassion [kəm´pæʃən] n.同情;怜悯 四级词汇
- adherent [əd´hiərənt] n.拥护者 a.粘着的 六级词汇
- ferocity [fə´rɔsiti] n.凶残,凶猛,暴行 六级词汇
- malicious [mə´liʃəs] a.恶意的;预谋的 六级词汇